Spelling and grammar in adverts - my white BX

[sub777w]

Thanks for all the comments. Nice to see I'm not alone judging by lack of grammar in some responses. No excuse but advert was drafted following a bottle of red wine and should never have been posted incomplete. Listing now amended and hopefully this time wont offend anyone on this forum. Just for the record I feel that i am justified in calling myself an 'enthusiast' as I have 5 citroens. However, I run a garage and thankfully don't teach English Language as my career of choice. I therefore make no apology for some spelling errors! Thankyou.

[mat_fenwick]

That's a lot better....but to be picky it would make it easier to read without the capitals.
If it ever stops raining in this country then maybe some pictures in the sunshine would be good too!

[sub777w]

yes will do, must get time at weekend so busy at garage will miss me little pearler but got cars every where selling my c6 exclusive next, now that a car and a half. then the c5 2.2 hdi.

[Philip Chidlow]

If I'd known a bottle of red wine was involved there's no way I could have criticised I've done a lot worse than that after some wine intake... usually involving buying as opposed to selling stuff

Good luck with the sale.

[Defender110]

Hands held high on this one; I'm not the greatest speller even without the aid of red wine which has been pointed out to me on more than one occasion on here!
The advert is 10 x better now and will hopefully draw some interest for you. It's a shame to do all that work then part with it though!